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Glenn Ebo Perry's avatar

I know that when the Kingdom comes,

The Lord will see my shrunken gums.

They’ve harbored tartar, plaque, and moss,

Because I never, ever floss.

I’ve learned that microbes in my plaque

Can generate a heart attack,

And that my halitotic breath

May cause a sort of social death;

That those who smell my breath may faint:

My exhalations can peel paint.

My lifelong fear, just like Dave Barry’s,

Has led to proliferating caries.

For why would a tender youth be thrilled

When cavities are drilled and filled?

Those fillings, when they have installed ‘em

Are made with mercury amalgam.

(Some newer fillings are epoxic

They’re just as good and much less toxic.)

My mouth may harbor dental dams,

Be televised on dental cams;

And where the cams find gaps and ridges

The dentist can put dental bridges.

Is pulling out my teeth a plus?

I would then be edentulous.

With no teeth left inside my head,

At night, before I’d go to bed,

I’d see what those TV ads once meant

And brush my teeth with Polident.

Glenn Ebo Perry's avatar

I will never forget the great Wayne Fontana,

Or the zest from Crest which replaced Ipana.

Margaret Maupin's avatar

And the Crest Kids, 10,000,000 strong and growing!

Bill Dunn's avatar

Glenn! You never amaze to cease me!

Alan Hays's avatar

You had me at edentulous

Don McIntyre's avatar

Ha- I had to look it up.

Alan Hays's avatar

Me too. I at first assumed it meant "evil dentist".

John E Simpson's avatar

installed 'em/amalgam: the footprint of a poet with nerves (and maybe fillings) of steel.

Randall Robinson's avatar

I still remember the smell of mercury. It's a bit stressful to wonder how these vapors may have compromised our lives for many years.....

Abby Becker's avatar

Damn, that was impressive!

Lauren V's avatar

That is fabulous! Also, I didn't know what edentulous meant before.

Harrison Bolter's avatar

We are in the presence of poetic greatness! 😊

Caiti Collins's avatar

OMFG! That is a perfect poem!

You are a linguistic angel!

D Ferrara's avatar

I have just reached for the bag of dental floss sticks I keep by my chair, in case I am inspired to floss. Thank you.

Randall Robinson's avatar

If you are so inspired, let us know (since I've never flossed).

Cloudy Rockwell's avatar

Barry's & caries! Never has there been such a fantastic rhyme! Thanks for the additional set of laughs.

Dr Dave's avatar

Put it to music, record it, and post it to YouTube!

Mark MacGougan's avatar

One day when I was in middle school, my tongue got caught in the orthodontia wire behind my lower teeth. I was taken directly from school to the dentist’s office. While I sat in the victim chair waiting for the dentist, the assistant brought in a tray of tools featuring knives and saws. I was worried that the dentist wouldn’t be able to understand me when I would shout “Pleeth don cuh mah tun ow!”

Suzanne M. Fregly's avatar

After two rounds of oral surgery, I had braces for three years, which meant I had to go to the orthodontist once a month so he could tighten the wires in my braces to the point that if my top row of teeth should accidentally touch my bottom row of teeth, I would either scream like a banshee or pass out because I couldn't endure the pain. The monthly visits also made eating (or I should say drinking) plain chicken broth or tomato soup the only feasible choices for the next 29 days, giving me only a day or two to eat as much normal food as possible before going to the next appointment, only for the torture to start all over again. In fact, I consider myself lucky not to have developed bulimia from the experience. It was like having a nightmare and being AWARE that you were having a nightmare, but being powerless to wake yourself up. Had I believed in past lives, I would have been sure that I must have been a serial killer or mass murderer to deserve such agonizing torture in my present life. Because getting the braces taken off was open-ended, I even contemplated suicide, unwilling to even contemplate a future of monthly torture, with no end in sight. Plus, I wasn't a big fan of chicken broth, and although I always thought tomato soup with a grilled-cheese sandwich was a fantastic combination, I couldn't bear having both on either of my one or two days a month in which I could eat solid foods, as weeks of having only tomato soup intermittently with chicken broth had ruined the experience for me. I learned never to try to answer a question either a dentist or orthodontist asked me when he had implements in my mouth, as I was sure doing so was part of an ongoing prank among all teeth-oriented professionals to see who could get a patient to drool the most. But I've digressed....

John E Simpson's avatar

That was a very good rendering of speech with an immobilized tun. I swoot you, sir. 👍

Colink's avatar

“Victim chair.” Perfect!

Wadeeli's avatar

Seeing that tray of tools was like the first view of a torture chamber. Which item will he use? I hope it won't be THAT one. No, not the one with the needles! What is this place, France? wadeeli.substack.com.

Randall Robinson's avatar

a cliff hanger.....so what happened next???

Mark MacGougan's avatar

The dentist strolled in, took a quick look in my mouth, grabbed a flat tool, and used it to lever the wire briefly and free my tongue. This seemed like a very good thing at the time, but probably killed my chances of selling the movie rights to my story.

Cynthia's avatar

I forgot about Anacin and Ipana! What about Brillcream (sp?) A little dab ‘ll do ya. Yikes I’m old AF!!

Michael McEvoy's avatar

Me too Cynthia . So I remember another one … Lucky Strike cigarette’s jingle ….” So round , so firm , so fully packed ! That’s my gal ! “ Merle Travis made it into a whole song

Cynthia's avatar

You know you’re in trouble when the dentist says “Why are your fillings made of wood??”

Bill Dunn's avatar

Or...why are your teeth made of wood, George?

Cynthia's avatar

Who’s George?

Bill Dunn's avatar

George Washington, who allegedly had wooden teeth. Sorry, it was a dumb joke.

Michael Bowe's avatar

Not dumb at all! Stan Freberg's "United States of America" has Ben Franklin complaining "Old George. Talks up a storm with those wooden teeth of his. Can't shut 'em off!"

Wis's avatar

😁 I got the joke, Bill. Ol’ George probably went to a carpenter, not a dentist.

Cynthia's avatar
13hEdited

No I like it! I just didn’t get it. Long day. I thought “I thought your name was Bill”

Wadeeli's avatar

Even today, my Chinese wife's siblings have implants grown in China. They provide temporary relief, only good for 3-5 years or so. Better than France, where, well, uh, better than France. Elaboration: wadeeli.substack.com

Cynthia's avatar

Oh I’m sorry. Is my dental appointment interfering with your happy hour??

Helena Handbasket's avatar

"Halo. everybody, Halo!

Halo is the shampoo

That glorifies your hair.

So Halo, everybody, Halo!

Halo Shampoo, Halo!"

This pops into my head whenever somebody sings out "Hello!"

Toddy McClain's avatar

"Use more only if you dare."

Cynthia's avatar

But watch out! The gals will all pursue you. They love to run their fingers through your hair! Omg what else is in my archives that I don’t even know is there?? Scary!

FrankLJ's avatar

Of course. That’s cause you are not still using that greasy kid stuff.

Doctor Mist's avatar

Do you wonder where the yellow went?

Cynthia's avatar

You’ll wonder where the yellow went when you brush your teeth with Pepsident 🎵 okay that’s it! I’m making an appointment for a brain replacement immediately!! Hey quick question: Can I request an Abby Normal??

Fran Tunno's avatar

Join the club Cynthia.

Alert Reader's avatar

I suggest Hormuz and the Waterslides; they’d play an infectious new fusion of 50’s doo-wop and Persian pop that we could all bop along to as we negotiate world peace.☮️

Butch's avatar

Honestly, TV commercials, back in the “olden days”, were easier to watch than what we had to endure today. On one streaming service, we are given two or three choices as to which stupid auto insurance commercial to suffer through. On the plus side, ridiculous TV ads do allow you time for a bathroom break, or to check your cell phone to see if you have any more scam calls, or to find out which monument in the Nation’s Capital have they decided to refurbish and turn into a carnival ride.

Chris(tobol)'s avatar

My favorite current commercial is for a drug that treats something, I'm sure, but what's entertaining about it is that ONE of the side effects is that you can DIE from a taint condition.

Susie's avatar

Yes!!! There are a couple of drugs out there with “taint warnings!”

Chris(tobol)'s avatar

This means there are frequent conversations with the sentence: "Honey-peach, can you help me check my taint?"

Right?

FrankLJ's avatar

Why would your taint be affected??

Judy Guenther's avatar

My childhood dentist (Frankenstein) gave me a lifelong dental phobia. I literally quivered and shake (and tear up) when that sharp pick is anywhere close to my mouth. My one time experience with nitrous oxide did zilch for me. And yes, “Marathon Man.” I would tell them everything the moment I saw that dental pick. I was sweating all through that movie. Ah, Ipana. I’d forgotten.was there another one that said “You’ll wonder where the yellow went when you brush your teeth with Pepsodent?”

wiredog's avatar

Yeah, I didn't go to a dentist for 20 years after I grew up unless I had to.

I loved nitrous, but I've only experienced it at Grateful Dead concerts.

Carol Anne Fusco's avatar

I had the exact opposite experience. I hated and refused to brush my teeth when I was little. The first time I was taken to the dentist, who happened to be my mom’s cousin, Vinnie, he looked in my mouth and said,” What a lovely shade of green!” I instantly fell in love. Vinnie’s wife was his receptionist and assistant. The radio was always playing in the background and whenever “their song” came on Vinnie would stop whatever he was doing and they would sing. I loved going to the dentist. He was also an excellent dentist. In subsequent years, after he retired, other dentist would comment on his work with admiration.

Randall Robinson's avatar

It's a little disturbing that I can still sing all these jingles..........

William's avatar

I don't remember hearing it, I think pepcident changed their slogan by my time, but I distinctly remember reading it in one of Dave Barry's books.

Many people experience an intense nitrous oxide euphoria, including Dave apparently but yeah neither you nor myself all that happens is my ears start ringing really loudly and I get numb all over and dizzy.

Anyone could find out how they respond to it by huffing whipped cream just don't turn the bottle upside down :)

FrankLJ's avatar

You can buy nitrous oxide ampules. They are for putting into carbonated water makers, that can also be used to make whipped cream.

You have to use neutral nitrous oxide for the cream, as the carbon dioxide used for the water will spoil cream.

Load up the N2O into an empty maker, press the lever, and be happy. At parties, these things are called ‘whippets’. A friend told me.

Rich Feldman's avatar

Well, at least you didn’t get berated by your dental hygienist for not flossing, even though you did for the last week so that you wouldn’t get berated for not flossing, but she was on to you.

Rich Feldman's avatar

BTW, another good band name: The Floss

Bill Dunn's avatar

I should use more Mental Floss.

Robot Bender's avatar

You can subscribe to that, you know.

Guy White's avatar

I believe the late, incomparable Jimmy Buffett (also a Floridian) wrote a song with that title.

Suzanne Hammond's avatar

Probably because your gums were bleeding!

Bill Dunn's avatar

I hold no grudges, and the name Sherwood Anderson DDS, of Clinton, CT, in the late 1960s, no longer causes me to cringe -- most of the time. But in 1966, he charged $4 to fill a cavity, and $5 to include Novocaine. My dad, with his meager teacher's salary and 5 kids, said, "My boy is tough." To be fair, an extra buck (times an average of seven cavities) was a lot of money back then.

Anyway, now that six full decades have passed, I can look back and laugh about it ... as soon as I stop whimpering in the fetal position.

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Wadeeli's avatar

YES, I recall dental work withOUT Novocaine. Tried going without it a few years ago for a small cavity, and the drill almost put me through the ceiling. To his credit, my Dad always paid the extra $. Leastways, while the beer budget held out.

FrankLJ's avatar

That’s amazing. Some still thought it was optional.

I have heard that starting in the 1880’s, the early days of anesthesia, they would give you gas that would knock you right out. See an example in Alfred Hitchcock’s original, 1934 “The Man Who Knew Too Much”. Some people were so afraid of going under, that they would have drilling, extraction and all, done with no anesthesia. A dentist would always ask them which way they wanted it.

There was a popular vaudeville gag based on this. The dentist asks, “Miss, would you like gas?” She says: “Certainly I want gas! You think I want a strange man fooling around me in the dark?” (for a while, houses and street lamps were lit by coal gas). W.C. Fields reworked it a little for his comedy short “The Dentist”.

K.'s avatar

Cheers to Brian! As someone working in the world of community college, let me also put in a plug for colleges' dental hygiene clinics if anyone out there needs to get a cleaning or maybe x-rays on the cheap (your locally-available services may vary), or just wants to try something different or help train the next generation. Yes, they're students, but under professors' watchful eyes and assistance. My kids and I have had good experiences there; the appointment just takes longer because they're going more slowly. Around here, it costs an optional suggested $10, worth every penny and more.

Roger Beal's avatar

When I entered my teen years, I went to the University of Pittsburgh's Dental School where students practiced orthodontia on my misaligned teeth. The cost was negligible, as I recall.

Wadeeli's avatar

True. I took my wife there and was impressed. The instructor watching over the student was SO COMPETENT...he'd actually installed a bridge in the mouth of his WIFE. Dude, that's my idea of professionalism. wadeeli.substack.com

LKN's avatar

Or a donation of $10

Charles Varrone's avatar

I grew up in Queens, NYC and attended elementary school in the fabulous 50's. You had to have a dental checkup before school started in September, seriously required. This was in the days before Novocain when certain levels of pain and torture were thought to enhance a child's development. The deal was when you couldn't stand the pain the dentist was obviously gleefully administering under the ruse of needed dental stuff, the pre-pubescent "patient" was to raise a hand to signal to the Tower of London graduate that he needed to stop for a moment. This futile gesture was completely ignored every single time. The "Dentist" would explain, as soon as the screaming subsided, that he did not have time for such nonsense as there was a waiting room full of children in need of child development. The idyllic memories of childhood just kept building.

LKN's avatar

All of this reminds me of Finding Nemo, although that purports to be an orthodontist, I think.

Dennis Litalien's avatar

I have always been able to tolerate going to the dentist, what I object to is how doggone expensive its become. I am also at the age where old fillings are being replaced by crowns, which means taking out a second mortgage to pay for it all.

Lynn Conchado's avatar

This reminded me of my childhood dental experiences. I had a tendency to pass out in the dental chair, until poor Dr. Hunt wouldn't see me anymore because he was afraid he was going to have a heart attack. Good times!

Helena Handbasket's avatar

When I was a kid, I had the only dentist in town who didn't use Novocain/Lidocain/Nitrous Oxide when filling kids' cavities. I guess he was afraid we'd turn into drug addicts.

I was so jealous when friends would tell me about their painless extractions, but my parents insisted I go to that guy.

Cynthia's avatar

Bucky Beaver needs an orthodontist not a dentist.

Cynthia's avatar
6hEdited

Dude! Get those things under control before we have to rearrange the furniture or move the party to another room!! 🙄

Ode to buckteeth.

Sherrye Pomeroy's avatar

Remember the swirling water bowl next to the dentist's chair? "Spit." And the SMELL of the dentist's office. Officially called Weird Dentist Office Smell™.

The huge irony back in those days (and I am not suggesting you are anywhere near old enough to remember anything like this): If you were "good," THEY GAVE YOU CANDY at the end. Candy. The super-epoxy stick-to-your-teeth JB-Weld kind. "Here kid, grow some more cavities. See you again soon."

Flash forward to the 2000s. I'm in the chair with a mouth full of metal and cotton — and a raging tropical storm going outside. I mumble, "Thow . . . ITH the power wath to go outh wight now, wath would you do wifth me here like thith in midth-prothTHEEdurr?" He blanched, stopping whatever he'd been doing in my mouth.

"No one's ever asked me that." Of course not. I just had time to think and make conversation.

"Thurly you havth a thenenerator, thum backthup thisthstum?"

He left the room for a while. Probably called his lawyer.

Wadeeli's avatar

I remember, "SPIT."

He'd say, "Okay, you can spit now."

Then he'd say, "I meant in the BOWL."

(Hey, we had to fight back SOMEHOW.)

wadeeli.substack.com

Sherrye Pomeroy's avatar

It was so . . . barbaric, in every way, wasn’t it? Just a step up from tying a tooth with string to a door knob for an “extraction,” or “biting the bullet” (for something, I forget, but likely is what CAUSED the extraction to be necessary in the first place, although I did not attend dental school in case anyone is wondering, and may not be current as to modern procedures).

Maria F Cleary's avatar

I remember the days of Harry and Bucky, when drilling one cavity indeed took a fortnight. Screamed so loud that I'm sure the waiting room folks are still suffering from PTSD. All those mercury-laden fillings, leaching poison into our clueless bodies, are now being replaced by crowns, which occasionally fall out. Now that's progress!

Virginia Lawson's avatar

Or gums run away from them, the saga continues.🤗🤗

Tutti's avatar

Very appropriate segue from dentistry to woodpeckers since the latter are uniquely qualified to be great dentists.

That is, until one perches on your shoulder and whispers in your ear, "heh-heh-heh HEH heh: Is it safe yet?"